Hello Harmony, I really like how you gave the cat a name and how you picked some cute pictures I remember doing something similar so it feels nice to see something
like mine but with a lot more creativity but maybe next time remove the business tips because this is not really like business tips but other then that I really like this post 🙂
Dear harmony
I loved your story and I really liked the name bobby and the photo’s are also cute. I also had a cat called Fiona who was quite sneaky and the story reminds me of her. Maybe next time make the story a bit bigger so its easier to read but I still enjoyed it.
From Amrin
Hello Harmony, I really like how you gave the cat a name and how you picked some cute pictures I remember doing something similar so it feels nice to see something
like mine but with a lot more creativity but maybe next time remove the business tips because this is not really like business tips but other then that I really like this post 🙂
Dear harmony
I loved your story and I really liked the name bobby and the photo’s are also cute. I also had a cat called Fiona who was quite sneaky and the story reminds me of her. Maybe next time make the story a bit bigger so its easier to read but I still enjoyed it.
From Amrin
HI Harmony, I liked your story about the cat and the part where the cat never came up. It was set out really well like a real news article. Ka Pai!